Sunday, March 27, 2011

a poem by Eli

He made it up while taking a bath and wrote it down when he got out of the tub.

SOAP

I put soap on the ceilings

I put soap on the wall.

I put soap on the beds

I put soap in the hall.

I put soap on the pillows

I put soap on our beach ball.

I put soap on the light bulbs

so they didn't work at all!

the end
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2 comments:

erin w said...

Um... that's amazing. Published child-poet? I think so. Start submitting to publishers ASAP.

8:53 PM
Jennifer said...

That couldn't be any cuter! I'm very impressed with his rhyming skills, that's a lot better than some of the poetry I've seen!

3:47 PM

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